Identify the Mistake You Made
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Why is this a Mistake? Why is it Important to Revise?
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How Often Do You Make This Mistake? Rarely? Often? Constantly?
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How did you repair it?
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Example: My sentences are awkward.
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Writing with flow increases readability. It also helps with clarity. Plus, I need to think more about my reader; readers don’t want to read through awkward paragraphs.
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I make it very often. In particular, I wrote many odd sentences in my second body paragraph when trying to explain something I found complicated. I must’ve gotten distracted. I also did it on my last paper.
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Many of my sentences just didn’t flow. With those, I added transitions. With a few of them, I cut the extra words. On a few others, I changed the sentence structure completely. I highlighted all the ones I changed.
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